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Old 05-01-06, 10:41 PM   #4
Ysdat
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ok playing.


like the way the beat comes in...
intro's cool.
"your the one they want"
^flow fucked up on that, aswell as a coupel of other spots.
emotion is good.
"heaven they are lasted"
^flow fucked up on that aswell.
main problem is flow in this bro, will be a dope track with a more constant spit in it.
Soun sliek you kinda dont know the rhyme yet, still reading it sorta ish.

good track though.
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