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Old 05-02-06, 01:52 PM   #2
L.E
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Listening...

Beat is pretty good.

Is that the hook off the bat..? Decent. Comes in...flow is kinda off beat...but it's decent. It gets better as it goes along. Delivery is lacking, kinda monotonous. Decent verse.

Second guy...okay...he's flow was alright but I could barely hear his lyrics. He really eeally needs to work on his delivery. Lyrics were decent.

Overall, decent track...just needs a little more polish.

Keep it up.
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