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Old 05-02-06, 06:31 PM   #13
Triple_N
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k...typign as listen...verse 1...kats flow aint really stinking wit the rhythm of beat...not feeling that at all...lyrically he aint hitting on much of nothing understand its a banger but he could at least track...his delivery wasn't much...he had energy but it lacked variety he was jus yelling for sack of yelling...verse 2 ok...limited ya delivery is better flow...is simple....lyrically on same level as dude...you too was lacking variety but went wit the beat well....hook is ah'ight...really lacked a catch phrase got a good meldoy but jus aint got that "HOOK!" this song left so much to ponder...I can see what this track coulda been yall was really close to having something really serious here yall jus came up short in sum key areas, if yall polished this up an gave a catchy ring of some sort it'd be a wrap....cuz beat was solid.........1
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