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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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agrees with ysdat... the message in the song is dope but ya flow takes away from it alil.... work on that... beat is cool... when ya do ya hook ya gotta make it stand out more... it's like the verse and the hook kinda sound the same if ya catch what i'm saying.... the only reason i can tell it's da hook is because of the repetition... this song could be so much better if you put more feeling into it... ya words are powerful enough but it's not enough if it doesn't sound like you REALLY GOING THROUGH IT while you're saying it, nah mean?....
track coulda been about 8.5 from me but it loses a point for ineffective emotional output... SAY IT LIKE YOU MEAN IT, HOMIE!!!..lol
7.5
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