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Old 05-03-06, 01:26 PM   #7
G Deuce
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Really feelin the beat................

Black first...........really good, solid flow. Lol @ the Grim Reaper line. I'm just going to ignore that line. Overall, really nice drop. I got the sense that your a "punchline" rapper. I would like to see some real tight lyrical shit sometime cause i'm sure you got that.

Chorus - lol @ the singing. I got the vibe that it fits, but it doesn't fit. Yea, i wouldnt suggest singin over this beat, really gave me a different feel then what your verses were givin me.

Q - Same, q flow, more laid back this time. Flow and timing is straight. Lol at the lil Debby, Nutty Buddy line. Wasnt expectin that one, which usually happens when i listen to your verses. OVerall, tight drop.

Overall, solid song, would suggest changing the singing to something else. 8/10
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