I feel that when you are writing about somthing that you are really passionate about.. or somthing that means alot to you the overall outcome of the song is so much better than if it was just some random rhymes your putting together...on that note..
hook that comes in at first...i didnt really hit me at the beginin... but then on the second and third hooks...i started to really like the way you put it together....
the hook...is decently catchy....this is not my type of song... but the hook pretty much paints a picture of what your tryna say...
1st verse..this is hot... flow is really sweet... like its pretty hype for bieng a gospel songs... had some pretty ill lyrics in this... first verse was pretty good
2nd.. verse i like this verse better than the first you killen it with the multis near the end... a lil slip up on flow but thats nothing.....damn... i cant bieleve i just played this gospel song like three diffrent times...
what i said at the top comes in here... because this is prolly one of the best songs of yours in my opinion... not the best.. but one of em......hard work on this one kid..
9/10
rtf
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