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Old 05-03-06, 05:21 PM   #8
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I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate
Its sorry bro... I got some bucks to help this weak bumb
For real son... my yardwork fucking needs done

vs.

you's a fat kid, a disaster on the runway
I know you can reach your goal...
...so here's a season pass to subway!!
beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!

ok, so this was an aiight battle. @ first i wanted to break it down bar-by-bar but felt like.. naw! but seriously, chrit came weak and good. people, notice his bars and his punches. like, each one has some effect in dissin his opponent. he used good set ups and then executed with an actual punch. tech, you didn't really do that with ur punches. you had the creativity/whit, but the execution was poor. if you work on that i see you doing really good in the league. good job to both and good luck.

v/ trapt wit
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