Fletcher.... work on your wording... it is killing the impact of your verse. A couple decent ideas but nothing really came together as it should.

Slic... work on not using overdone wordplay... the israeli line was VERY played. incomes a bitch has been done... the second to none line was a good flip on that cliche...

basically... slic worded his punches much better and had a few good ones in there. Nick didnt have much due to the weak wording


v/Slicknife