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Old 05-04-06, 06:19 PM   #11
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It was str8. had a lot of good vocab and emotion. u got ur point accross in a smooth manner. structure was good and so was the flow. most of it after the 4th line began to get deep. thats when it really picked up. good shit. 8/10
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