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Old 05-04-06, 06:26 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Raw King
ay man. theres a lack of talk of god in lots of rap songs. Im not the most religiouse but people in aword shows winning for songs called let me fuck u from behind always thank god for the rewards but dont mention him through hardships of making it. plus ur verse had a lot of true emotions that explain ur intent for the verse. nice piece of work but Im not sure if it was the way I was reading it but by the 3rd or 4th lines....it stretched out a lil. still a good verse though...just wit very minor tweaks...7/10


thanks sweety.....
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