Met-A-4
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wtf.. roflflflfl. daed, ur a jerk.. what ever though. i'm breakin this one down.
Dick Riders worship you. But when you lose voters won't think it's staged.
I even got Kempo Doubtin' me, but HOW THE FUCK YOU THINK MIM WAS MADE?
..naw. this was a decent concept, but it wasn't that effective. should've been worded better..
Can you be serious, or delirious, I mean Damn this Joke.
Champ is just not Cut Out for you even if you dropped Ransom Notes.
..this was nice. could've hit harder, but good concept..
Me lose they expect it right, 'cause He's the champ, damn he's set for life.
But his Writer's Block must be ambidextrous, cause he's got nuffin Left to Write.
..dope. another good concept and effective. nice..
He brought an Early Christmas to text, clearly he's done well.
But little do we know, Mimesis' .gif to text is mearly a Thumbnail.
..hmm.. aiight. not really feelin it, but its aiight, i guess.. =/
The high pitch screeching, and explosion, I know you heard it man.
It was just that Car Wreck of a verse lucky I Ensured the win.
..no! this is mad play'd, yo. just lose shit like this..
Ya'll have been suckered in to his skill well this bitch is over.
Your wordplay was so damn Forced, It's using Jedi Mind Tricks on Voters.
..lol, its funny cause u used this in a champ match, eww..
One played punch after another, and I'm just sittin' through.
Your drops are full of Setups that look like they Snitched on you.
..lol, that was ILL. i liked that one, yo..
You got a Clef that if I give you a Chin Check It might Strike Back.
I'ma stop with the pic jokes, cause I'm afraid my kids might end up like that.
..dohpe! this was really good. keep up shit like this..
Ya Girl is fat as fuck and your homo, that's been you right?
Dinner comes she orders 4 sides plus all the Menu like.
..um, naw. not feelin this @ all..
I knocked all opponents Lights Out, But yours are crap.
I had to pay an Electrician to turn them on Before the match.
..this was ok. i know its been used before, but u flip'd ok..
vs.
Your whole verse was played as hell. . just drop that rhyme, jerk
You'd need gravity, friction AND movement to make that force line work
..lmao, that was so fed, but it was funny as hell and dope..
It went out months ago. . it'll be no joke when I start harmin' the Rell
We just made eye contact and your whole fucking face started to swell
..lol, cool..
Me, Myself, And I?. . your title shows you know how it sounds to be rattled
Though that may be a cool movie. .
. .it also means I'm going to Carey your body out of this battle
..nice, this was ILL and witty..
Gettin knocked out. . what were you thinkin posting that booed verse?
Cause when I say So ill. . it's just because I'm requesting some new shirts
..meh. not really feelin this..
You stepped for a rippin. . so it's only fair I keep breakin your spine cold
Cause I'm about to drop a # 2 faster than nervous kids taking their finals
..nice, good and nother witty concept, effective to..
Haha. . I really can't believe that the whole damn league'll be seeing this
You got that wack style down to a tee. .
. .and I'm bringing a set of golf clubs to beat you with
..roflflflfl.. this was ILL..
I'm the Zeus of the league. . here to keep this wack hoe in his place
Cause you just keep getting Gaea with every fucking post that you make
..lol, this was ok but not really feeling it too to much..
My punches'll keep owning your face. . just give me something to rip
Figuring out your level of talent isn't easy. . but there's still nothing to it
..this was good. i liked it cause of the cliche, simple and effective..
20 lines has been more than enough. . I've already just owned this coward
So here goes nothing. . ahh, wait. .
. .you've had your verse posted for hours
..ahh! this was straiight but this wasn't really a punch..
That was some tight shit. . though I still gotta keep breaking your raps
But you SHOULD start worrying. .
. .cause even you know you're getting raped in this match
..good closer cause of the ego and confidence and the fact that its pretty evident u won..
ok, this was a good battle but easily one sided. rell, you had some good and witty lines, but they were lackin that "punch"! they could've been wayy harder and worded a bit better. some of the concepts you had as well were really weak to, but u did have some good ones. just not enough to win this, imo. but mimesis, this was a good verse. good and hard punches. witty/fresh as hell. overall better verse. good solid punches and nothing to weak or weak enough to hurt you. this is an honest vote people, i'm choosin favors either. good job to both and g/l with future battles. but..
v/ mimesis
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