this is a verse I wrote against X-tortion...I just want some feed back to see if any seasoned people out here can tell me how it sounds. Iv already dropped it so I wont be able to change so its cool.

I'll leave u broke if sex sell...X..u best bail....
u only XL...a size too small...even the best fail...
u calling for battles...it drops like nextel...
u x-man...battling the man of steel...so get real...
ur best deal...is not droping at all...
theres too much blood on the walls for voters to consentrate on u dawg...
and if I dont use personals...that means that god is merciful...
punchlines that dont ryme'll get ur spine fliped vertical....
to be real...are u sure wanna except?...
hasn't ur rep taken enough punishment yet?....
who the fuck am I battling? u aint one of the best....
u unknown to this text...u just one of the rest....


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