Uneven Battle.
OneStepBeyond
Alright kid, lets be honest, you ain't nothin' to shelf,
Cause you ain't a pro, zack... That’s just what you take to keep from cuttin' yaself,
- ... Eh,i heard it all before like Sunshine Anderson
We’ve done open mic’s and homie you watched as my doors widden,
Now I roll with the big dog’s.. You just roll on the floor crying,
- It flows well,but not a hard hittin punch at all
You’re Algebra cause we don’t understand you? Well hoss,
Even I passed it… Just never thought that I would pass it a loss,
Say you’re looking for a good name for you to post on your sound click,
But every name you choose is gay.. So I guess that you’ve found it,
I posted myself drunk… Got responds like “This kid is on acid!”
And yours got a simple “Keep your shirt on! That shit ain’t attractive!”
Bitch, this is madness… You ride Q’s nuts like the bench that he lurks,
Shit… I wouldn’t doubt it if he’s mentioned in your verse,
The more we figure you out the deeper you get? That’s somethin' supreme,
But true, cause the more I realize you're wack, the farther above you i seem..
Overall a fairly decent verse,nothing exciting.
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Algebra
u a skateboarder and plus you love rock
so how u a rapper must just be the pot
ima die of laughter your messed up OMG
you crackin me up your rhymes get old
ur wack as fuck just say goodbye and go
u dont have ta be a skater ta grind a pole
you probably use Q ta get ur dick sucked
must not have a clue u must be mixed up
i seen ur face ur scarred ta post ur pics up
- Bad,but it's a little better
your worried cuz your a faggot not a man
with hair more curly than old ass Ragedy Ann
Seriously, what you need to do is work on some punchlines. Listen to some other battlers (off rapverse) and im not saying bite,but try to develope yourself a flow and learn how to create hard hitting punches that get the listener.
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My Vote: OneStepBeyond
I cant vote officialy,but i didnt type this up for nothin.