you know what i liked this piece, it was decent still. the imagery kept me reading this piece. there was a decent amount of emotion. feels like this would be better as an audio piece though for some reason. vocab was pretty basic though to be honest, but it ain't so much of a thing this time though. i liked the rhyme scheme in this as well. the story was cool too. I'd have burned someone if my girl lef me for a girl lol.

good piece keep it goin fam

RTF please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227675

~peace~