this was a nice drop.vocab had sting and emotion had tears come with it. nice feel and creativity. it made me think and kept me interest through the whole piece.Ma stay up and drop some more ill shit!

any way's RTF on the links in my sig....



She grasp my arms and moved close to me, "what the fuck?"
"we have to do what the poem says- not the time to give up"
I felt the adrenaline scorching in my viens "Ok"-sweating hard,
butterflies flying happily in my stomach, nipples pointing afar,
I inhale my breath, my lungs tighten-until I felt her lips on mine,
so passionatley, lovingly, both of our chest touching each other,
fetl like both of us we're angels flying and holding one of another.
"Do you like me?" I asked when I pulled away looking in her eyes,
in my surprise she responds "Uh..Lets go to bed"-Why she hides?
In the night beneath the sheets' I''ve found my answer, How I Know?
We was destined to be together, cause finally after 5 weeks,
I felt the blow of the A/C on that night, mom came in and asked
"Damn who paid the bills in this house!?"...."I don't know"

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i liked the ending!

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