aight.... I LOVE THIS BEAT.....
lol... you followed Waynes flow on this.... sound like Jeezy some spots....
you cant really hear everything you sayin.... you gotta uppp your vocals a bit... like 3.5....
actualy... upp it in the beginin... cuz the end it was fine... in the begining it was like you was whispering... so i couldnt hear your verse....
if this is a freestlye.... it was aight.... untill it got around 2mins and 30 seconds... it got pretty weak .... a lot damns.... a lot of geniric stuff to keep it going... like Ed Lover.... lol... from 105.1... that nigga be rhymin like you just did.... WOW... that cough at the end was a bit much....
things to work on:
well.... next time you should prolly write a track... Freestyles are coo too... but .... this is Songs Forum... you know.... so.... write a track.... upp your vocals when you record.... and dont free style an outro to your track....
aight dogs.... keep dropin....
5/10
RTF