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Old 05-06-06, 03:41 PM   #11
Triple_N
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k..typign as I listen....good beat choice..intro coulda stronger..shoulda had a ill catch phrase or a more original sounding uh type sound....k..real commercial approach...flow fits subject matter....delivery is where ya def improved alot ya pronouncing ya words now....hook was simple an repetitve an mixed nice..good idea for subject matter...lyrically u aint come wit nothing..I think u coulda mixed a few tight lines in there but its all good this is something katz would bump lyricism woulda been icing on the cake but as is still good...keep'em coming........1
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