hmmmmmmmm.. where did I hear this beat? oh yea I remember this sc beat...I hated it, dude flipped the sample horribly......hmmmm I think u overdid in the delivery...shoulda toned it down...had more of a up an down delivery mellow with energized empahsizer words...that would took it over the top but your beta choice is killing you....lyrically I feeling you...I feeling how u told story thru double meaning....lyrically an conceptually good..flow was good..a bit repeitive but good....jus your beat choice an your overdone emotion hurt u but mostly beat....u killed a good song wit a wack beat....hook was decent but it lacked a catch phrase as well...barring the beat...this was a decent track but not ya best look ya kno...stay up......1


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