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Old 05-07-06, 02:29 AM   #12
M&rk
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1,2 step type beat, hope u got a singer on this... not enough emotion ya voice could be a cooler sound but u seem like u tryin to spit grimmy but it doesn't fit ya voice it seems or this beat
i like the chorus lyrics and flow, just need a singer for this type of song and beat
good as club beat, just i think u went a lil to grimmy on it.
good shit i'd give it a 7/10
def could make this a 9/10 with a few corrections
return the favor and hit this song up
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227829
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