O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Voted For: Chief
JD - first I noticed all the dead space in the beginning. You coulda said something in there....got us hype for the track. Your vocals were pretty clear. You had a couple alright punches in teh beginning, but then you were pretty much just self glorifying and shit. It works if you just throw them in a few bars, but this was mostly self glory in my opinion. Then you forgot to cut the beat off at the end.....I seriously hate that. It shows lazyness....
Chief - Wasn't really feeling the intro too much. Your flow was pretty nice on this one. You also had a pretty good presence. The first verse was pretty much self glory, but the hook and the second verse were where you made your money. I think you should have got rid of the hard SSSSS in your vocals, but other than that, I thought it was a pretty good track. Beat change....lol. This verse killed it.....lol. You came at him pretty hard with it. Good job man.
Vote - Chief
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