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Old 05-08-06, 01:46 PM   #14
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Voted For: mR iKiLL.

Im not sure but I think Ziq bit that wak verse from some were. I honestly didn't like this battle at all though. not because u guys suck or anything...theres talent there. its just that mr iKill used to much gangster theme shit in his verse which is not creative at all for a text battle. I liked some punches on his verse but none of them were really directed towards ziq and he needs to use more metaphors and personals. ziq needs to fix his flow and structure. the way u read it should be the way u say it. if its even a little off then its gonna sound weird while we are reading it.
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