I actually really liked this, it had it's only rather elegant element to it that really gave your words life. Nothing in it in terms of vocabulary or imagery were super over the top or anything, but just what they needed to be. And I really think that level of simplisity and raw emotion mixed with some creative imagery made this a surprisingly great read. I wasn't expecting much because of a few grammatical errors and structeral imbalances early on in the piece... But I really enjoyed this alot. Great job and I hope we'll be seeing more of you and your work around here.