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Old 05-08-06, 04:55 PM   #1
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Voted For: Hair Bear

when u sauid wak fuck....I u was probably speak on behalf of both of cuz this battle was borderline shit. D.P. I noticed u change ur name...on behalf of R.V....thank u. I did like the way u started some of ur lines but then u droped it wrong. ur closer was decent but it could always be better. ur open was comical but it wasn't a punch at all. work on it and u'll be str8. Shoosh...get off the gangster shit...aint no thugs on the net dawg. I dont care wat no one says. we do this to get our skillz up and to keep bizzy when bored as fuks. u need to also work on ur structure, flow, metaphors, punches, and every thing else.

v...D.P. aka Hair Bear

could one of u please vote on any one of my battles. Id appreciate it on the real.
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