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Old 05-09-06, 05:28 PM   #8
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Daubs big time? Aint happening. Kid aint movin past me
Only busting out... when its in terms of his acne
..lol, funny. could be better, but effective..
I cant bash this clown... he's too nice to go down
Face bringin enough white and black heads together MLK would be proud
..dohpe idea/concept. not sure if its ever been used before, but i've never seen it. nice..
Kid is greasy... not gutter, so when I'm beatin this guy, I'll..
Add heat n butter, n this chicken'll fry...
...n get eaten alive
..lmao. this wasn't that harsh of a punch, but funny as hell.. fry, chicken? wtf?! lol..
Good to see you brought green, the residue straight stains
No, not the blunt, I'm talkin when a dude like you rocks a fake chain
..ILL. seen the concept, but good flip, especially connectin the blunt and chain together. good ish..
GFX head gettin blazed, even better when getting pissed, but....
You shoulda atleast photoshopped a few friends in the picture!!!
..ok. made me giggle cause its funny, but could be better. still, not bad..

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Lying bastards a fairy, aint scary..your not menacing man
you want pic battles every week just to see as many menace you can
..lmao. nice flip, duke. this was really ILL..
mans gay so its true the only faggot in this joint is you
ideas on lock cause,
his long nose acts as a sniper target for his point of view
..lol. dohpe. this could be ILL'er, but you still executed the punch well..
faking to peers so in this case im hating on queers
theres no point to your life, like ther aint on your ears
..NO! eww.. this was gross man. no real punch here. i mean, there is a punch, but uhh.. i dunno. not feelin @ all. maybe could've been worded better cause its not a bad concept and stuff..
his wack hat hides his boff, but watch as ima be whorin him
his heads prolly a mop, so its only right that i wipe the floor with him
..naw son. this shit was mad weak and play'd..
buzzlight year lookalike, f'real you aint testing me mate
with sockets so deep,they started to swallow the rest of his face
..lol. good punch. especially like how u pointed out how he looks like buzz lightyear, rofl..

hmm.. ok. this was a pretty good match. both came with good disses and nice concepts. chrit, you definately had the personals. and the wording was all good on your part. somethings could've been a little bit more harsh, but still, you did ur thing. daubs, you also had some good concepts, but u also had a few i really disliked. the mop thing was play'd, could've been worded better to. i mean, u said u had 28 lines, well you should've chosen your best ones and what not. felt you could've been a lil more meaner. but, i see chrit gettin this with consisancy, wittier concepts and better wordin. good job guys.

v/ chrit
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