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Old 05-09-06, 07:22 PM   #2
Enygma
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I gotta say that your quality is pretty good. Some pointers I would like to make though.....you seem to have a monotonous delivery in this one. And it's kinda mechanical too.....like, choppy. You could pull that delivery off if you were more fluid in your flow......just let the words all connect to each other....lag off beat just a slight bit, it's ok

Nice shit though
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