listening...

beat is dope as hell...

your flow has gotten a lil better....but it still seems a lil inconsistent to me...

hmm people could grasp the story a lil bit better if you didnt use the same tone throughout.....its kinda of like that robotic monotone feel that u need to get rid of.


at the end the dubs kinda seem a bit off and werent lined up well....

presence was real good. delivery was ok...i just thought u needed to switch the tons of voice up with the story to grasp the listeners attention more...i know i would have followed it better anyways.


not a bad track though.....nothing id download but id prolly listen again or something

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