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ok, this piece is more than 2/10 but not by much. the flow is real choppy. no multis. basic rhyming and in a few bars, you didn't rhyme at all. <---some pieces call for that, not yours. as for the story, the creativity behind it was terrible. expand a little? thanks. you're insane for rapping. no pun.
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