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IP:
this was hot. i enjoyed reading from start to finish.
flow - perfect
multis - decent
metas/similes - decent
content - original
I’ll take what I have, my present, my past
And use it to reshape my future with a pen and a pad
^^^^^^^^i liked these a lot
overall, dope. i wanna read more.
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..::You couldn't touch my SkyLL if i wrote lines on my palm and placed my hand on you::..
Battle Wreckord
33-2
.:::~*!*~Line Of Tha Century~*!*~:::...
^-=!~I was checkin' my *reflection*, i'm just as *dope* as *coke on mirrorz*~!=-^
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