this was way fukin better than "ooooo kkkkkkk". this was ill. flow switched up some throughout. basic rhyming - fine for this piece. vocab was good. content was hot.

It tells me to stay... so I do but it’s fake
There isn’t Happiness here only thing that dwells is mistakes
That leads you to the choice that leaves you shallow
In which you feel so ashamed you hide behind no ego but a shadow
^^^^^^^^liked this a lot.....real nice.

Fear!?...What fear do I preside?
When the only difficulty I declare is the means to decide
Whether to go or stay….Whether to live or die
But eighter way when the day comes I know I will abide
^^^^^^this made me read to the end. very nice fam......

overall - 8.5/10 keep that shit comin......

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