i really like your style, really chill, one thing is you should speak a little more clearly. the effects in the background are pretty dope, you could be really good, needs a little swagger, you seem a little shaky, be confident, even if its not a bragadocious song. for the most part i liked your flow, best line was the bum stared back in the mirror...good shit man...good fit with beat. its true money doesn't buy hapiness. good shit.

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