I liked this piece alot. It was a cool concept... Kinda makes a person feel excitied about writing.. I though this was a really good read, but I'd like to make one suggestion...

Your flow can improve greatly in this piece...and also really improve the read. All you have to do is focus on rewording some lines here or there... For ex.

"it drys and then becomes permanently stained.
once it is complete the verse it self is explained."
to
it drys and then becomes permanently stained.
once it's complete the verse is self explained

ex. 2

"be glad that we are blessed with skill to be bold.
like i was once told, the ink in the pen is wut is really made of gold."
to
be glad that we're blessed with the skill to be bold.
like i was once told, the ink in the pen is truly gold.

You can find it in a few other places too... rewording is key.

Nice drop,..

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