This was a decent drop i would have to say one of the best ive seen from you ..you had a very creative topic and you took a very creative point of view on this..your feelign and emotions werent quit on par as i would have expected it to be ..but overall this was a pretty nice drop..only think that could have been better was your vocab and wordplay usuage..you could reword your bars and make them sound alot better... keep it up elevate.

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