I'm guessing SV was first......The problem was that you were trying to fit too many words in each line. I used to do the same thing......cut some words out. Second dude (Chalk?)had no presence at all. The whole thing was monotone. Same thing with the flow....too many words in one line. Third guy (Smoke Uno?) had a better presence and quality, but his dubs were off pretty bad and he also had the same flow problem. Just work on cutting some of the words out here and there......

I see you guys trying to come up though....good shit fellas ™

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