ok. i listened. i thought the beat was basic, but you all try fiiting too much into a single bar. you end up farther behind beat which personally loses my interest faster than exercise to the obese. i however listened to the whole thing. lyrically, i cannot comment because my attention was on all of your flows, which didn't match that beat. so just do what's been said. take out extra words, work on delivery and presence....it's a mic, not a fukin c.ock.

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