The beat is kinda strange, that's the first thing I notice, not bad but not good. How you come in on the first verse sounds weird/bad, but it picks up. Damn, I'm lovin the delivery, your shits really polished. Like, reallllly polished, lol. The hook is sick, how you come out singing after it isn't though IMO. Lyrics overall are damn good, I like the building off shit that people take for granted when they see it everyday. I think you should have spit more than 1 verse though. Pretty good, keep it up and return the feed, i'll edit with link.
Here ya go...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...262#post2742262