I like this, the normal version is good to. But I like this one more cuz of the mix of a rap. But uh, you have a pretty nice flow, it's so poppy and hip. Keep like that man. Your delivery is pretty good to, keeps the track real. I like the message you left me with, I was thinkin before you'd go all gangsta, but nah you kept it honest. overall I like this song quite a bit. keep it up.
mind rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227959