for the first track. I thought you had a solid flow on a nice beat. You have a nice quality, delivery was decent, your up for the most of it then you go down. Exactly like how you said in the song when you lose outta breathe but in other words your delivery went down. Your lyrics were tight and made me get into it more cause I like when cats have intense lyrics. overall your drop was tight.

for the song "threat" I like it, very tight and soft beat. You went with the ease laid back flow, pretty solid job with that. delivery was there, you do seem a bit tired but it's cool. You also wrote the deep lyrics here too, made me get into it. overall I think you did a nice job.

could you rtf here please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227959

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