Pretty good freestyle, if it really is a freestyle. It seemed like you wrote some of it, but I aint gonna question that man. Your flow seemed pretty straight forward like you did it with ease, a few decent lines in there. the beat was perfect for a freestyle, You coulda got a bit more serious though man. Make it a bit more interesting. But overall you did a good job.

could you rtf here please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227959

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