k..1st joint..beat is decent nothing great...ya quality alot better.....flow has gotten alot better too....delivery improved but still needs work tho...your dubs is really saving u but the lack of variation in ya tone still shows...u going wit the laidback style so delivery is HUGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lyrics u had sum tight lines in there son..Soc still got them punches dats wassup...keep dat up.

track 2....intro was eh...awww..I always hated this beat...I believe Arkane right? the bass fucked the whole beat up...but onto the vocals....flow is a bit robotic...ya not really really catching the rhythm, you catching the snares....delivery needs more variation..if u had went btw a whispering tone an ya reg tone on this u would torn this shit..but vocally u pretty stayed in the same zone whichs hurts u on such an emotional beat cuz the beat is setting the emotional tone all u had to do was match it an ya didn't so thus the beat overpowers u, an carries u really...story was good but this is a case where the saying applies "is not what you say its---->how u say it" overall good song especially content wise it jus the other aspects but u clearly coming around..as I told u before its all about practice....gotta record everyday man or at least every other day........1

__________________