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Old 05-15-06, 12:50 PM   #5
Triple_N
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ah'ight...dawg I know its delayed but I aint forget ya.....beat was good...ya flow is somewhat robotic...choppy...think beat was too slow for you, cuz u aint really rip how ya could of, delivery has gotten better son like how ya using ya voice...ya change ya tone up..not drastically but a good deal, it was still monotone but its getting there, a few dubs an sum flow change ups an you'd be solid...jus ya flow aint ride that smoothe...lyrically solid..u headed in the right direction my dude....keep it up......1
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