^ Check yourself dumb fuck. Self Portrait and Atti are the same person. And I highly doubt he's trying to do that cause' he is smarter than that and i'm sure he has himself a girl where he lives. Now stfu and actually feed the poem.

I felt this had good imagery and emotion. You could have made it stronger and more vivid with a more colorful vocabulary though. If you would have done that I have no doubt it would be nominated for HoF. But other than that, I think this was a nice piece. Keep up the good work.

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