i think sometimes people confuse short stanzas with simplicity ... when i do poetry online its usually typed quickly as the emotions come to me ... which accounts for my many typos... but you on the other hand .. place careful consideration on your word choice and punctuation .. which is very admirable ..poet to poet... glad bag had it confused .. there was nothin simple about this poem... i read it twice .. and im sure i still missed some of the things u were trying to illustrate... never the less ... i like the style and choice words of description .. like sandpaper quilts ...and noose's calloused hands... i makes the poem more vivid .. the imagery is not straight forward... buti like it because it leaves room for each indvidual reader to explore the poem as they see fit... nice drop