Half breed....... you sound like you from the UK............. you gotta work on Pronounciation.... openin your mouth over the Mic... lyrics seem fine... you juss need to tighten up the flow a tad and make your delivery more Butter....


your like a 5.5/10 right now.... compared to amrican hip hop standards
your like a 7.5/10 if your judged against other UK audio on this site

but all them things you gotta work on can easily make you 8 and quarter.... and wit a lil time... a dime... you know?....

keep your head up .... and drop another try out in a couple months....


im serioulsy considerin a International chapter of OYD.... outta Europe.... to expose the camp to a larger audience.... i dont know.... we'll see... but in anycase... holla back mayne... and keep doin your thing

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'