Listenin, this beat is tight...has that dedication feel to it..hook is good, aint rlly feelin the mixing on it a lil..like the lyrics...these lyrics are real tight...im sure she was reall happy when she heard this..You can tell u had a great emotion when u wrote this..this is one of my favourite from u, hook is growin on me alot..if u had a singer on this it wud jus wrap it up...\

Flow: 4/5
Delivery: 5/5
Emotion: 5/5
Pronounciation: 3/5
Lyrics: 5/5
Quality: 3/5

Overall (out of 20): 16.9/20

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