i like the beat...its chill...nice

hook kicks in....its aright...its good...a lil catchy....theres just something that i think its missing...to make it a great hook....maybe if you would added another stack to the stand out parts of the hook...and added a flanger to em...it woulda added to it.......i dunno...its just missing that extra push to make it bananas...but i do like it...better than a WHOLE lot of hooks on this site...it has mad potential....

flow is coo...could be a lil more smooth...its a bit choppy in a few parts...not alot...but here and there it could be touched up...

delivery is coo...presence is nice.....i think u could switched up the tones of your voice with what your saying a lil more...u did a bit...but i think if you woulda switched your tone up with everything u said...it woulda seemed more like you meant what your were saying more....and def. woulda added to the song......


overall this song was pretty tight man....could use a few minor touch ups.....but i enjoyed listening....i actually listened a few times....good job

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