Hmm honestly I'm not feelin this one. The beat just seems not that good man, sounds cheesy n shit. A little to slow as well, I found it like you have a fast flow and it didn't fit with a styled beat like this. Your lyrics are good and emotion though, very deep and a lot of imgery with it. Overall I'm not feelin this, I think you could have picked a better beat and made a way better song.

rtf on my freeverse now

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