words for the hook aren't really clear....verse 1 starts out kinda sloppy flow wise. I liked the little part where you sped up ur flow/put in some multis a bit. flow on verse 2 is more on point. But overall the track seems rushed n' stuff, n' doesn't seem like the normal u to me. I suggest you rerecord this or somethin, cuz I think you could make it a lot better.