1st dude, has a pretty nyce flow and lyrics are kewl, just needs a bit more emotion...2nd verse was better, definetly deeper content

hook's pretty nyce

Mad Dog, definetly better emotion so your part stood out more, lyrics were nyce on your part my man...deep lyrics, I hope people pay attention to 'em and think

overall, if ya boi had more emotion his part would've come across a lot better, he's gotta work on that, but besides that, this is a nyce album track man, keep it up