View Single Post
Old 05-18-06, 03:20 PM   #11
Ysdat
Whys That?
 
Posts: 2,007
IP:

ok you beter RTF cunt

Playing....


first guy, flows bounces nice on beat, Uk accents are dope. First guy seems to loose focus in parts, could of come alot more hyped.

Hook is ok, could of done with alot more attention.

second verse, im playing thru headphones and the vocals keep switching from left to right. Just a heads up.
Flows good, lyrics are solid.

Hook also switches left to right and back again. Unsure if its a effect you were going for, but it sounds weird in my headphones.

Third verse is alot more hyped and alot more emotion, like the lyrics, this verse is solid.

again hook needs more attention.


good track though bro.

hit up link in sig.
  Reply With Quote