aight RTF'ing here...intro was ok but i'm pretty much wit everyone on the upping your vocals...flows good ya kicked in ok...beats nice...laid back type ish...2nd verse kickin now delivery is good flows decent....lyrics are hard to hear...emotion is ok...seems a tad forced...but i unno if thats how you jus deliver it....
overall: ye it was ok if ima be honest i wouldn't personally bump it...vocal volume let it down but the beats nice flows there...reminds me of some Death Row type beat...ye it's good...keep droppin and advice for next track would be to work on the EQ a bit more
